September 5, 2007
This is just an Idea that I was thinking, might work for Thesis.
(I was previously thinking of using one of my Ideas for Thesis, but after the very first lecture in our first class, I dropped that idea. It had four Characters and way too much conflict going on. It had nothing else but Conflicts. So, I think I rather go for much simpler things.)
So here it is…..
A girl is in a garden, enjoying nature. There are beautiful trees and flowers everywhere. So she’s very happy there, and just walks around to see more of the garden. Then she notices that something is shining a lot under a tree. She goes towards it to see what it was. She finds a beautiful tree, in form of a lady. Its branches were filled with beautiful flowers shining throughout. Each flower was different than others. She breaks one flower from the branch, and holds in her hands. Suddenly, tree’s branches start shaking. Girl gets scared, and step back. Lady tree screams and opens her mouth wide open. The next thing we see is a room, and girl waking up from the sound of her alarm clock that happens to be a screaming girl.
Storywise, I think it's okay, but I don't see any major Conflict going on. So.......I have to work on the story, and make it more solid.