Comments from Adam...

Yesterday, November 1st, during meeting with Adam, I had one of the comments about last 3 shots. I have close up of little girl's hands from the point when she catches butterfly, then she opens her hands to have a look at it, and then lots of butterflies come out. One of the suggestions that was made was to not show so many close ups, and instead move the camera around to show her face, and show the hand from front point of view, and then move the camera behind her to show the last frame, and that is to show butterflies up in the sky from her point of view. I think it makes sense because it would show more of the action, and not so many close ups. It doesn't change my story at all, but just a few of the camera placements. So this is what i need to work on now.